Comments on: The Freelancer – Chapter 55 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/the-freelancer-chapter-55 Fiction by J. Nicole Whitten Wed, 10 Mar 2010 22:50:30 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: J. Nicole http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/the-freelancer-chapter-55/comment-page-1#comment-1538 J. Nicole Wed, 18 Nov 2009 05:58:49 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=475#comment-1538 I suppose it's not so much that he feels more than he's meant to...I think I'm just catching nuances of words that make him seem unintentionally clingy in my head. Or maybe I've just edited and re-edited this fic to death and need to finally be done with the posting so I'll stop reading too much into stuff I wrote. :P But I love that you're lovin' it. That's really all that matters. I suppose it’s not so much that he feels more than he’s meant to…I think I’m just catching nuances of words that make him seem unintentionally clingy in my head.

Or maybe I’ve just edited and re-edited this fic to death and need to finally be done with the posting so I’ll stop reading too much into stuff I wrote. :P

But I love that you’re lovin’ it. That’s really all that matters.

]]> By: Debbie http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/the-freelancer-chapter-55/comment-page-1#comment-1537 Debbie Wed, 18 Nov 2009 04:00:59 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=475#comment-1537 TBH......I don't know that I would have said 'borderline obsessed', but to me it doesn't matter. This is a very gripping story, and whether you intended (or not)for the characters to feel more (or not) than you intended.......well I guess one way to look at it is if the characters are more deeply involved, then the reader is going to be even more invested in what happens to them. I'm totally loving this, and am rapt that there are gonna be twice weekly updates...YAY!!!!! I love a good gripping story, and I am looking forward to what you have planned for these characters.......*hugs* xx TBH……I don’t know that I would have said ‘borderline obsessed’, but to me it doesn’t matter. This is a very gripping story, and whether you intended (or not)for the characters to feel more (or not) than you intended…….well I guess one way to look at it is if the characters are more deeply involved, then the reader is going to be even more invested in what happens to them.

I’m totally loving this, and am rapt that there are gonna be twice weekly updates…YAY!!!!!

I love a good gripping story, and I am looking forward to what you have planned for these characters…….*hugs* xx

]]> By: J. Nicole http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/the-freelancer-chapter-55/comment-page-1#comment-1536 J. Nicole Wed, 18 Nov 2009 03:08:13 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=475#comment-1536 Hmm...what will his move be indeed? He's a bad guy, sure, but he hasn't really done anything truly evil yet. (I know, murder is evil...but it was such a benign way to kill someone...*shrugs*) Not to give anything away, but let's just say the "honeymoon's" nearly over. Time to throw the lovebirds into Hell... Or not. ;) You know, I totally didn't intend this, but does Colin seem to like Maureen a little too much? I didn't realize it at the time when I was first writing it because I never used to care much about support character actions (this is my first novel...), but when I reread it now, Colin seems borderline obsessed with her. And he's totally not supposed to be. Am I the only one thinking that or did I actually turn him into a needy chick-man by accident? Whoopsy! :D Hmm…what will his move be indeed? He’s a bad guy, sure, but he hasn’t really done anything truly evil yet. (I know, murder is evil…but it was such a benign way to kill someone…*shrugs*) Not to give anything away, but let’s just say the “honeymoon’s” nearly over. Time to throw the lovebirds into Hell…

Or not. ;)

You know, I totally didn’t intend this, but does Colin seem to like Maureen a little too much? I didn’t realize it at the time when I was first writing it because I never used to care much about support character actions (this is my first novel…), but when I reread it now, Colin seems borderline obsessed with her. And he’s totally not supposed to be. Am I the only one thinking that or did I actually turn him into a needy chick-man by accident? Whoopsy! :D

]]> By: Debbie http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/the-freelancer-chapter-55/comment-page-1#comment-1533 Debbie Tue, 17 Nov 2009 13:24:27 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=475#comment-1533 Yay for chapter 55!!!!!! Mmmmmm.....gotta wonder what Chad's next move will be regarding Jenna - what a creeper!!!! *shudders* I think Collin will be very upset when they find Maureens body - if indeed they do find it - he seemed to like her a lot. I'm looking forward to Wednesday (well, Thursday in my part of the world)already....loving this!!!! *hugs* Yay for chapter 55!!!!!! Mmmmmm…..gotta wonder what Chad’s next move will be regarding Jenna – what a creeper!!!! *shudders* I think Collin will be very upset when they find Maureens body – if indeed they do find it – he seemed to like her a lot.

I’m looking forward to Wednesday (well, Thursday in my part of the world)already….loving this!!!! *hugs*

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