Comments on: LWLU – Totally Busted

By: Sydney Katt

Sydney Katt — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 15:06:02 +0000

Newsmile – You know, if I was a teenage guy and my secret girlfriend/secret fiance refused to tell anyone about us while she was going on dates with another guy, I’d probably be a little upset too. I was glad to write the bonus chapter. I was on a roll! Happy New Year to you as well.

Deb – Well, letting her explain would be the rational thing to do…but when do these characters ever act rationally? Counting the hours, huh? How many do we have left?

Fernanda – Sorry, I can’t really respond. I think the meaning of your comment was lost in translation.

By: Fernanda

Fernanda — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 18:58:14 +0000

Mike It was not direct us more hurt to see him say it, more to give his side entetender

By: Debbie

Debbie — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 13:32:13 +0000

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO US – A BONUS CHAPTER…YAY!!!

No! No! No!….Michael waiting for her…trusting her with her ‘study session’…….*shakes head*

Well it looks as though this relationship never really had a chance……. In the beginning they realised their feelings for one another, and couldn’t get enough of each other, Sara promises to spend some time with him that night, then blows him off to run around after Nika, Sara gets busted coming home by Michael and….it’s over?????!!!!!!

Not that I can blame Michael…..he must have been very hurt to see Paul hug her. Maybe it wouldn’t have been so bad, if Sara had just got out of the car, like she was being dropped off after her ‘study session’???

Oh what a tangled web you weave hun…….I wonder if he will let her explain??

Now I am counting the hours until Friday!!!!!!! Drat!!! I’m gonna be twitching by Friday…lol…

By: newsmile

newsmile — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 11:33:20 +0000

Oh!now Sara has to explain why she was with Paul!
I think Michael will be very angry!
Thank you sooo much for this bonus chapter!

Happy new year