Comments on: LWLU – Happening Again

By: J. Nicole

J. Nicole — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 07:31:36 +0000

Hard to tell with Paul. He doesn’t want a girlfriend before he leaves for college, yet we know he was hooking up with Nika in, what, 5 or 6 months from now?

Indeed it did. This may be the one secret Nika’s ever kept, huh?

I actually really enjoy writing the backstories. It’s a nice break from land of tension that exists in the present day story. I’m still toying around with writing some of the backstory from the point of view of other characters, just to fill in some of the holes that we can’t get from Sara’s perspective.

By: Debbie

Debbie — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 02:58:32 +0000

Oh my!! So Sucre is not such a nice guy in this fic?? And, Paul was not so ‘unaffected and calm’ as he portrayed…….maybe he likes Nika as well, or maybe (at this stage) he just genuinely wanted to make sure ‘whoever’ was with Sucre was ok……..

Mmmm……Wonder what is going on with Nika…..obviously something has happened in her past *taps chin*

At least Sara has seen another side to Paul..not just the argumentative side she saw with Veronica….not such a bad guy after all..still, I just love all these backstories, makes the current situation all the more intriguing!!!!!

Hope you have a great weekend….*hugs*

By: J. Nicole

J. Nicole — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 17:04:42 +0000

Yep. Looks like everyone in this story has a secret.

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

By: fernanda

fernanda — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 09:16:50 +0000

Nika hides a secret?. I like the way you approached Paul and Sara she saw that Paul is a nice guy. YOU DID A GOOD JOB.