Want to know how I did it? (besides pacing around in my house, trying to pretend I was in the situation then writing how screwed up my thoughts were?) I came back and rewrote this scene after I wrote the scene where someone (who’ll remain nameless) just had to absorb that I killed off their love interest (again, who’ll remain nameless). I think I was actually alternately weeping and calling myself a bitch for ruining this person’s life…so I was in a good frame of mind for writing sheer panic…I think.

“No, I was a man wasting time.” yep – another good significant stand alone!

*** Ramble some more here, like a man in love, not an agent, but in agent language, if that makes sense*** Every single act of violence he committed was because of Jenna or his grandmother, because of his twisted love for them. *** lightbulb comes on!***

His grandmother’s house. He was crazy enough to think that could work.

I completely felt his panic and loss of control through your writing in this chapter. I felt the pacing, the searching for the next step. Outstanding writing here. I don’t know how you nailed it, but you did! Totally sucked up into desperation with Jackson!

Isn’t Collin’s death critical to Jackson’s character here and in subsequent novels? Maybe it shouldn’t be so briefly covered here. Jackson has to be on the scene, in the emotions. I would like that, as a reader (with the knowledge that this plays into Alliance too).

(if you can’t tell by the posts, it’s a very quiet day at work today! :p haha)

I’m with Star…I hope he can get there in time!!

Waiting with anticipation for tomorrow – wait!! haha no, it is today…..Yay!!!