Comments on: The Freelancer – Chapter 87 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter87 Fiction by Sydney Katt Thu, 09 Feb 2012 15:09:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Sara http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter87/comment-page-1#comment-5080 Sara Mon, 18 Apr 2011 18:29:25 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=641#comment-5080 Instead of: Chad laughed at how easy it was to elude the agent following him. He’d learned to drive on these roads and knew just how to get away. The agent probably reached the dead end before he realized he was no longer following the correct car. Maybe: ? Chad laughed at how easy it was to elude the agent following him. The agent probably reached the dead end before he realized he was no longer following the correct car. (chad eluding the agent implies he's familiar with the roads already) Instead of:
Chad laughed at how easy it was to elude the agent following him. He’d learned to drive on these roads and knew just how to get away. The agent probably reached the dead end before he realized he was no longer following the correct car.

Maybe: ?
Chad laughed at how easy it was to elude the agent following him. The agent probably reached the dead end before he realized he was no longer following the correct car.
(chad eluding the agent implies he’s familiar with the roads already)

]]> By: J. Nicole Whitten http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter87/comment-page-1#comment-2147 J. Nicole Whitten Wed, 03 Feb 2010 06:31:49 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=641#comment-2147 Why thank you. I had to come up with something for my little self-important evil genius. ;) .-= J. Nicole Whitten´s last blog ..<a href="http://dark-passenger.net/get-rid-of-that-not-so-special-someone-on-valentines-day/" rel="nofollow">Get Rid of that Not-So Special Someone on Valentine’s Day</a> =-. Why thank you. I had to come up with something for my little self-important evil genius. ;)
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]]> By: Debbie http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter87/comment-page-1#comment-2137 Debbie Mon, 01 Feb 2010 12:55:18 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=641#comment-2137 Squeeeee!!!! At least Chad isn't gonna go back to his apartment and bust Collin.... But contaminating the fuel.......ingenious, but I so worry for all those innocent people. Hope Jackson and Colin can figure this out soon....... Looking forward to tomorrow.....xxxx Squeeeee!!!! At least Chad isn’t gonna go back to his apartment and bust Collin….

But contaminating the fuel…….ingenious, but I so worry for all those innocent people. Hope Jackson and Colin can figure this out soon…….

Looking forward to tomorrow…..xxxx

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