Comments on: The Freelancer – Chapter 84

By: Sydney Katt

Sydney Katt — Mon, 21 Nov 2011 15:44:25 +0000

The road trip was never part of the original manuscript. It was something that just sort of happened when I was doing the final story revision. I liked the idea of them not having to deal with reality for a while.

Now is probably a good time for me to let you in on a not-so-secret secret of this series: Anyone can die at any time…even Jackson. No one is safe. Doesn’t matter if we’re in Book 8 or Book 3. All characters are fair game.

By: Beth

Beth — Mon, 21 Nov 2011 13:47:42 +0000

Aw. That would be sweet if they just drove off into the sunset…

Ugh I feel really terrible for what I know must be coming. Jenna is going to be devastated and Jackson too- when he finally realizes she’s innocent.

I really like Jenna though I hope she doesn’t get killed

By: Sydney Katt

Sydney Katt — Tue, 19 Apr 2011 02:19:40 +0000

Hmm…If Jackson starts giving too much more description of what she’s wearing, he’ll probably start mentally undressing her…but I’m making a note of that for when I do the final round of edits next month.

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 18 Apr 2011 18:26:35 +0000

I’d like a little more description of their clothing / attire. Fill out the scene a bit. I haven’t reached the end yet, but if clothing is a factor in a scene later… might be nice to visualize it here? Doesn’t have to be crazy or excessive, just a bit more description.

Jackson is wearing a tie… okay. Suit? Color? How does it fit him? Jenna’s mental opinion of how he looks?

Jenna’s wearing a strappy black dress… long? short?, fitted, flared? wicked spiked heels or slightly more practical?

By: J. Nicole Whitten

J. Nicole Whitten — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 12:46:24 +0000

You never can tell with him. I think Jackson’s suspicious of his own shadow!

And oh what a day tomorrow will be…
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By: Debbie

Debbie — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 11:35:25 +0000

Huh!!! I bet that comment will knock Jackson for a six!!!! He sure wouldn’t expect her to agree to go with him like that if he thought that she was up to something tonight….would he???

*jumps up and down* Can’t wait for tomorrow…….xxxxx