Comments on: The Freelancer – Chapter 1 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1 Fiction by Sydney Katt Thu, 09 Feb 2012 15:09:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Sydney Katt http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-6816 Sydney Katt Mon, 21 Nov 2011 04:24:32 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-6816 Jackson is something all right. He's the character I've been writing the longest out of all of 'em. Could probably do his dialogue in my sleep at this point. Jackson is something all right. He’s the character I’ve been writing the longest out of all of ‘em. Could probably do his dialogue in my sleep at this point.

]]> By: Beth http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-6791 Beth Wed, 16 Nov 2011 05:34:23 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-6791 *starts reading* I have a feeling I'm going to enjoy this one. Undercover hmmm? I am definitely down with that. Wondering about the details of Jackson's wife leaving him for his partner..that is...ouch. Jackson sounds quite...handsome ;) *yawns* bedtime for me but I'm excited to have some new reading material *starts reading*

I have a feeling I’m going to enjoy this one. Undercover hmmm? I am definitely down with that. Wondering about the details of Jackson’s wife leaving him for his partner..that is…ouch.

Jackson sounds quite…handsome ;)

*yawns* bedtime for me but I’m excited to have some new reading material

]]> By: J. Nicole http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-817 J. Nicole Sun, 31 May 2009 00:57:34 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-817 Hi Rose. I'm happy you've decided to try out my non-fanfic. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Then again, maybe it's not so different since I know who you're imagining Jackson to be. ;) Don't feel rushed to catch up on the chapters. Just read at your own pace. This novel isn't going anywhere... Hi Rose.

I’m happy you’ve decided to try out my non-fanfic. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Then again, maybe it’s not so different since I know who you’re imagining Jackson to be. ;)

Don’t feel rushed to catch up on the chapters. Just read at your own pace. This novel isn’t going anywhere…

]]> By: Rose http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-816 Rose Sat, 30 May 2009 16:23:36 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-816 Hi Jen, I liked the start a lot, surely will enjoy the whole story:), and what you described about the main character I just pictured only one person, you know who;) I'll try to catch up with the current update and thank you for letting me know about this site:) Hi Jen,

I liked the start a lot, surely will enjoy the whole story:), and what you described about the main character I just pictured only one person, you know who;)

I’ll try to catch up with the current update and thank you for letting me know about this site:)

]]> By: J. Nicole http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-812 J. Nicole Tue, 26 May 2009 03:22:27 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-812 Hey Jules! Looks like shameless self-promotion actually works every now and then... ;) He pretty well stays that sarcastic throughout the series so he might be just your kind of character. It just doesn't matter what frame of mind I'm in, when I sit down to write Jackson Caldwell, sarcasm starts to drip onto the page... Hey Jules!

Looks like shameless self-promotion actually works every now and then… ;)

He pretty well stays that sarcastic throughout the series so he might be just your kind of character. It just doesn’t matter what frame of mind I’m in, when I sit down to write Jackson Caldwell, sarcasm starts to drip onto the page…

]]> By: Julie http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/freelancer-chapter1/comment-page-1#comment-811 Julie Tue, 26 May 2009 03:09:53 +0000 http://www.yourlittlestsin.com/?p=36#comment-811 Well written Jen. I like the feel of your main character so far, he has just the right amount of sarcastic wit to appeal to me. I like this paragraph: What a bizarre family I must have, I thought as I headed across the parking garage to my car. I had two sisters of my own and I could be sure that my parents would not have condoned either of them hitting on me. Well written Jen. I like the feel of your main character so far, he has just the right amount of sarcastic wit to appeal to me. I like this paragraph:

What a bizarre family I must have, I thought as I headed across the parking garage to my car. I had two sisters of my own and I could be sure that my parents would not have condoned either of them hitting on me.

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